1樓：匿名使用者
a lecture will be held at...and how to prevent it...mr li,a famous...
will held...i think it is very useful.we...
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2樓：yeziallan年
1.a lecture will be hold at long zong square form 7:00pm to 9:00pm（哪一天？）
2.this lecture is talking about a(h1n1) and teach us how to prevent it.
3.the holder ,mr li ,is a famous doctor and expert form cfcap,who has full experience.
4.many knowledge (knowledge 是不可數名詞不能用many修飾。應為much knowledge)
5.and we can prevent it better(and 改為so)
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